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Tsuki no Usagi

by Wrath of the Bunny


Tsuki no Usagi, my name, my title, my role.
But to be alone?
I watch
but can but never be apart of.
To see fun, to see love,
How do I know if what I am feeling is real?
Or the illusions of someone who longed for,
Closeness.

My life has been spent from afar,
from people but now,
I have felt the warmth of love.
even if fake.
And I do not wish to return home.
But I must,
even now I feel it,
Calling,
Pulling me back to the abyss.
I claw, I bite,
I kick, I scream,
I cry.
But it is all futile.

Tsuki no Usagi, my name, my title, my role, my curse.
I watch,
but I do not take part.
I feel,
But do not know if it’s fake or real.
I am a reflection,
But I am real.


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Fri Mar 14, 2008 7:26 pm



Thanks. I'm happy you guys like it.

I didn't know it was a song.




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Fri Mar 14, 2008 4:20 pm
Adnamarine says...



Wow! This is really, really good!
"Tsuki no Usagi"... love it:) For your first attempt at poetry, this is amazing!

*adna*




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Fri Mar 14, 2008 3:19 pm
Maki-Chan says...



I Like it. I never heard of the song but now I want to. SOoooo... I am going to search of YouTube- wish me luck ^_^>




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Wed Mar 12, 2008 6:39 pm
Stori says...



Like, wow. I think that really fits with the style of a Japanese song.





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